Wednesday, January 03, 2007

here comes another poem
that i am about to start
will it be about happiness
or my heart torn apart?

even i am clueless
how this poem is going to be
then you cross you into my mind
and now i finally see

that i just want to let you know
that so much love i have for you
but what i want to know is
can you love me too?

16 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I hope that she'll love you back.

2:44 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

You know the best thing to do is ask her personally if she loves you too.

"It is better to ask and take the risk of getting hurt afterwards, than to never ask and learning too late that she feels the same way too."

5:07 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

A nice poem.

10:29 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice poem.
on unrequited love...
it exists to make one realize that there is always one person that we cannot have.
it also exists to make us cherish the chances that the one we love loves us back.

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12:11 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I've been in that situation before. Its hard... overtime I learned to love unconditionally, accept reality, and I was able to sleep better at night. Keep your head up, be strong, stay strong, this too shall pass...take care.

L

2:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

umm.. love someone that loves u

4:14 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

why do i have this feeling that she loves you the same way you lover her?

10:08 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

great poem!

simple yet heartfelt... (but it's way better if you tell this to her!) ;)

1:34 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i wonder if she's been visiting this blog...i hope she does and realize how much you trully care and love her...don't lose hope Luis...one day she'll be ready...:-)

5:19 AM  
Blogger julie anne said...

Is that poem dedicated to TONI G???
heehee!!! i hope one day Toni realized how LUCKY she is to be loved by you-LUIS!!!

10:54 PM  
Blogger russ said...

nice poem. didn't know u have a poet in you. more power to you luis! will watch ur new show rounin. :)

6:55 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i hope he'll love u back.

10:44 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

be patient and keep on trying and doing what you do. you're a sweet guy. some girls just want the fairy tale where the guy would run after her so she knows for sure that you truly love her. im like that too. it's a test that you need to pass. so just hold on lucky. because if you let go, you'll never know what could've happened. also think about meteor garden..the girl didnt know she loved him but really she did. ingat ka palagi lucky..at wag mong kalimutan madaming tao nagmamahal sayo. in the next lifetime, if im the girl you love, i'll love u back more, 'cuz you're the kind of guy im looking for..

btw you write really good poems. i write poems too..usually when im sad hehe i sound so emo. cge take care always and remember everything happens for a reason.<3

1:12 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like you & Anne together. :)

2:38 PM  
Blogger plasticsatellite said...

awww...

2:06 PM  
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