Saturday, August 07, 2004

another poem...... made in about 4 minutes


I thought I was going to be happy
I thought I was going to feel love
I was about to drop on my knees
and thank the lord above

with you I felt so special
but now I feel its not true
what did it have to happen now
when I’m so crazy about you

I’m so lost in the dark
I don’t know what to do
I think about you so much
I cant stop missing you

so there is nothing else to do
only wait and see
because maybe in your heart
*I can still see me
*there's still a place for me

(i gave you guys two endings to choose from)


Blogger aecee said...

uhmmm... i think the ending for me would be... "i can still see me..." nice poem!!!

12:20 PM  
Blogger porcupinespunk said...

I prefer the latter .. Ü

2:49 PM  
Blogger larace said...

cool poem... i prefer the ending to be i can still see me!

6:29 AM  
Blogger Vikkicar said...

I can still see me...

4:13 AM  
Anonymous andrea said...

there"s a place for me is nice.good poem.........keep it up:-(

8:52 AM  

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