waiting .... another poem i made
Waiting
When will the day come?
When will the sun shine?
When will I have someone?
To truly call mine
Someone to hug
Someone to kiss
Someone to constantly think about
Someone to miss
When will that day come?
So now I don’t know what I’m going to do
But deep down inside
I’m hoping that it’s you
When will the day come?
When will the sun shine?
When will I have someone?
To truly call mine
Someone to hug
Someone to kiss
Someone to constantly think about
Someone to miss
When will that day come?
So now I don’t know what I’m going to do
But deep down inside
I’m hoping that it’s you
posted by luckym at 11:07 AM
4 Comments:
hi there, i can relate to the poem, hmmm its so deep yet so true and agonizing, tada that' life!! keep paying
-jhong@blogdrive
hey louis, we same problem... many have told me that the right time for people like us will come. we must not wait, we should keep seeking.
when im reading your writtings, i really do can relate myself. its nice to see that there are also people that thinks like my way.
I really love this poem. Ang ganda talaga. E-mail mo ako okay? Ito yung e-mail address ko:
alternativegrl_jrm@yahoo.com.
sheryl
hi luis,
i can really relate your poem love can makes you feel great but this really a scary thing too.but it says that a Great Love, a Great Achievements remember it involved a Great Risk.
But it doesn't really matter at all.
you know, its happening to me right now, im still waiting for the right love too.you know someone could love me inspite for who i am.but for now, its just only a dreams, wishing somebody will come into my life and can take care of me forever.thanks for your poem.take care!.
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