Wednesday, August 11, 2004

waiting .... another poem i made

Waiting

When will the day come?
When will the sun shine?
When will I have someone?
To truly call mine

Someone to hug
Someone to kiss
Someone to constantly think about
Someone to miss

When will that day come?
So now I don’t know what I’m going to do
But deep down inside
I’m hoping that it’s you

6 Comments:

Blogger .hannah. said...

haaaaaay.. i can relate.

*a little scared though.. love is scary. bitter-sweet.. feels sooo good, but hurts twice as much. is it even real? hmmm.. id risk the pain just to find out.


"if loves the greatest gift.. and we have so much to give,why doesnt anyone want mine?"

*when we were little.. the simplest things were enough. he'd just hold your hand, and it meant everything to you..... i miss that feeling.

*i miss those days.. i miss taking care of someone. is there really someONE out there for everybody? hmm.. then what's taking him so long? haay.

*i just need someone to hug me.. |close| & wont ever let go... [for real this time] :(

7:53 PM  
Blogger im_a_chick said...

i know, when the girl for you comes, you'll treat her like a PRINCESS (or maybe a QUEEN)!

whoever that girl is, i hope you'll be able to call her "mine" soon.. :D

cheer up luis!!

8:26 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

hi there, i can relate to the poem, hmmm its so deep yet so true and agonizing, tada that' life!! keep paying

-jhong@blogdrive

8:56 AM  
Blogger nazer said...

hey louis, we same problem... many have told me that the right time for people like us will come. we must not wait, we should keep seeking.

when im reading your writtings, i really do can relate myself. its nice to see that there are also people that thinks like my way.

4:29 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I really love this poem. Ang ganda talaga. E-mail mo ako okay? Ito yung e-mail address ko:
alternativegrl_jrm@yahoo.com.

6:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

sheryl

hi luis,

i can really relate your poem love can makes you feel great but this really a scary thing too.but it says that a Great Love, a Great Achievements remember it involved a Great Risk.
But it doesn't really matter at all.

you know, its happening to me right now, im still waiting for the right love too.you know someone could love me inspite for who i am.but for now, its just only a dreams, wishing somebody will come into my life and can take care of me forever.thanks for your poem.take care!.

5:50 PM  

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