Sunday, April 03, 2005

not perfect

life is fair
life is kind
despite all its complexities
with you, i dont mind

you give me a challenge
you make me want to see
and all because of you
a better man, i want to be

to prove myself worthy
pls give me a chance
maybe to just walk and talk
or ask you for a dance

im not perfect
i know its true
but one thing is perfect
its how crazy i am about you


Blogger Lizla said...

wow! i like the poem... u know what, u'r in blues when you write tis poem. right? tc and God bless

11:47 AM  
Blogger janken said...

hmmm the last time I had written a poem like this was... when I was in elementary. good thing you still have the spirit within you though, Lucky! Gotta excuse me, nobody is perfect!

12:19 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Excuse me Luis but is that dedicated for Anne Curtis? It seems like it was meant for her.

9:38 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wow Luis, you're really a great poet. your work really strucks me... i'm so kilig! hindi ka lang pala funny at so gwapo, romantic pa!! gosh!!! nakaka in luv ka talaga!!! I admire you!!!! hope to see you in person...

5:46 PM  
Blogger loven said...

hey dude, its seems your bloody in love right now, is she the ONE already, you seem so happym im really gladm this will really be a beautiful birthday for you. keep it up and be happy always

2:05 PM  
Blogger clinE said...

:) keep lovin'! its such a wonderful feelin kaya... la lang! wala nmn aqng alam tungkol dyan eh..hehe..bata pa aq! :)

2:57 PM  
Blogger clinE said...

nd by the way nga pla 'kUyA', hus the 'LucKy' girl?:)

2:58 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

its sooooo nice tlaga... i really like it... +GodBlessÜ

5:55 PM  
Anonymous karla said...

nice poem... =)

10:51 AM  
Blogger aika said...

really really sweet!:)

10:45 PM  
Blogger CARME said...


your poem is like whoa! =d i like it! =d

take care! =d be thankful for the blessings! =d

11:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

this poen for ellen?

9:42 AM  
Blogger Gracel Romero said...

Just droppin' by.. you have a nice poem. :)

10:27 AM  
Anonymous chloe said...

it's great how you're striving to be a better man for the person you love.

i think that's what love should be about. :)

2:52 PM  

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