Tuesday, May 17, 2005

if

if you only knew how much i care
if you only knew how much you meant
that day in and day out
i believe that you are heaven sent

i could watch you for hours
stare at your pic all day
but everytime you're infront of me
your beauty leaves me with no words to say

when you talk about beauty
the epitome will always be you
always leaving me hoping
that i could be special to you .....

35 Comments:

Blogger avid_luis said...

lucky me for being the first one to view ur blog after the latest update...
by the way, ur poems are fantastic-no plasticity attached..hehe

3:36 PM  
Anonymous ...bora05 said...

there is so much that words cannot fully capture... everything comes with what's deep inside... that's what's real and special... i may not see you, but you'll always be special to me :-) night

2:25 AM  
Blogger untalkativebunny said...

sino toh? si toni? kidding. hey.. just kidding. the closest i can link us with is Katz. remember her, a.k.a navarro from ateneo? anyway, i dig ur humor and sarcasm.. write on...

4:54 PM  
Blogger untalkativebunny said...

o-k. what a small world.. ur friends with trina too? we used to sing in a band together.. shes the greatest non-commercialized singer ive ever met and heard. i-d-o-l.

5:09 PM  
Anonymous glynis said...

kuya luis,i'm neophyte when it comes to this thing called love...but all i can say is that show the person that you love her and that you are really interested in knowing her better...sana iyong "her" na tinutkoy is s ate TONI...hehe...xe pow u really look wonderful together,parehas po kayung gorgeous,smart and funny...nweiz,kami mga babae po,plus points po sa amin ang isang patient na guy...so sana po,if ever d pa po ready ate toni mag commit sa 1ng relaxnshp,sana po maantay niyo xa...(assumng na xado aq ha,naa si ate toni tlga!)GOD BLESS you always,spxly ur wonderful heart!!!mwaahh...

7:27 PM  
Anonymous glynis said...

kuya luis,i'm a neophyte when it comes to this thing called love...but all i can say is that show the person that you love her and that you are really interested in knowing her better...sana iyong "her" na tinutkoy is s ate TONI...hehe...xe pow u really look wonderful together,parehas po kayung gorgeous,smart and funny...nweiz,kami mga babae po,plus points po sa amin ang isang patient na guy...so sana po,if ever d pa po ready ate toni mag commit sa 1ng relaxnshp,sana po maantay niyo xa...(assumng na xado aq ha,naa si ate toni tlga!)GOD BLESS you always,spxly ur wonderful heart!!!mwaahh...

7:29 PM  
Anonymous no name said...

hhmm..binabasa mo kaya yung mga comments?...amp..hehe

10:30 PM  
Anonymous *** said...

if u feel something for someone,then show her...how will she notice it if u dont let her know,right?
nice poems,btw...

11:33 PM  
Anonymous joanne said...

uhmm is this for me? wuv you so much....miss u too

2:23 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

TO JOANNE,

you've got to be some kind of a sick poser! all the pictures in your site are that of angela boyd's, a model

how dare you use her pictures. and she doesn't write like that at all.

stop it with fooling people!

9:41 AM  
Anonymous "drew b." said...

hey kuya lucky, ur a good writer paLa.. lol, *nice poem*

"you think you know but you have no idea"?? *gasps* you stole that from mtv!!!! hehehe..

okiez, well tc! :p

12:20 AM  
Anonymous serene said...

whew!..is that you, LUCKY?...i cudn't believe you also have that mushy side of you.. i mean, i always see as sum1 soooo makulet, funny, mapang-asar and all...but you know, i haven't really thought of you as sum1 sooo softee!... well, i'm glad you are becoz it only goes to show that you're human too hehehe and that a man being able to show the world how he truly feels is more manly than those who are hiding behind the facade of his musculinity...watever! hehehe.. keep on posting poems.. i hope i cud have my blog soon..and hopefully find your post there in too...gudLUCK!

3:58 PM  
Blogger chEr said...

nice poem.. simple pero may meaning..

6:58 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

didn't know you could compose a poem... nice one.
Anyways, just thought Id say hi. Visit my blog if you have time http://www.xanga.com/may
See yah!

10:04 PM  
Anonymous loveyani said...

hi luis! just stumbled on your blog. You really seem the kind of person who reflects everything that's inside of him especially when it comes to a person you love the most. I do hope that special someone that inspires you to write this poems will come to her senses and will love you back more than you expected it. You do have respected her and been patient waiting for the right time. I hope everything will work out for you and I hope that it's soon......

8:18 AM  
Blogger super-karla said...

who.. is that anne?? :P

6:21 PM  
Blogger franz said...

naman e. you shouldn't have to do this. promise. mahal naman kita e. *zzzzzzzz*

7:25 PM  
Anonymous airhead said...

Whoa! super senti ka pla tlga.. nice.. :D like d title, "if", but stop w/ d if's and start acting.. gudluck anyways.. peace out! :D

3:54 PM  
Blogger aLvS said...

Hi pO! anG GalInG niYo paLA guMaWa nG mGa poEmS... Oi iNspiRed si KuYa.. hehehe... siNo pO bA anG iNspiRation niYo?... hehehe...

allivlorelei022@yehey.com

8:44 PM  
Anonymous oinky meme said...

oinx, i like reading your peoms and your blogs... =) sweet sweet pa nyan!

1:01 AM  
Anonymous lyn said...

any guy who knows the word "epitome" has me. hahaha. awesome poem.

11:44 AM  
Blogger jeff said...

nice poem!

hi guys just wanna invite everyone yo visit my site and be part of my journey!
tanx!

6:07 PM  
Blogger jeff said...

nice poem!
im inviting everyone to visit my site jeff87, and join me to my journey...
thanks!

6:22 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice poem! keep up the good work!
and if it's for toni, just wait for the right time, maybe she's not yet ready... and maybe 1 day she'll realize that she'd be "lucky" to have u...

7:31 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

great poem! or should i say awesome!!! hehe newei, ur so sweet pla... it doesnt show sa face eh.. hehe.. pro whoever u are dedicating this must be very lucky to have u as 1 of her manliligaws... pwede mag apply? harhar... hehe... jokey joke lang... pro promise, ill take good care of u... oh wag seryosohin, wla lang magawa eh...

9:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

helo
you don't know me and i don't know you either. i mean i only know you as LUCKY manzano. but it just so happens that i ran into your site if that's what you wanna call it. and it has caught my attention. i like your poems, for a poet like me you have written a very good poem. although i'm a poet i don't think i'm that good though. but i can say you ARE good so i want to tell you to keep writing and i'll be reading your poems soon..

i'm lisan of hong kong by the way

12:40 PM  
Blogger sam said...

Hey Bapples! Still harassing the people at MYX? I'm sure you are. :D
Anyway, I added you to my links.
Took quite a while for me to visit my blog again so I'm adding other blogs to my list just now.

Well, hope you and the rest of the gang are doing great. It seems like you've got a lot going on for you right now so take it easy and don't get any crazier than you already are. The world's safer that way. :)

5:28 PM  
Anonymous anna said...

i didnt know you were into poetry.. impressive

2:11 AM  
Anonymous V said...

Sorry if i've been acting like a bitch, hope you can forgive me ? :)

5:44 PM  
Anonymous shey said...

hi luis im shey nice poem ha! u know i really admire u! keep up the gud work god bless!!

9:43 PM  
Anonymous anonymous said...

toni or not toni?

that is the question.

bwahahaha! kidding! don't blush ah! :D

2:49 PM  
Anonymous am_real said...

oooooooh... how i wish those poems are for me... u really melt my heart..!

2:46 PM  
Blogger crazy anne said...

you're very talented talaga.....
bagay kau ni toni...=)

9:59 AM  
Blogger crazy anne said...

you're such a talented guy! =)

10:01 AM  
Anonymous rooting4U said...

luis...this poem could melt anyone's heart... but then SHE is not anyone, but I do hope she'll read this and realized what a great guy you are,I am sure no one can doubt your sincerity and love for her...

SOMEONE...please bring HER back to her senses... I can't take this...aagghhh...

3:28 PM  

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