old poem.. but just posted it, what do u think?
STUPID
I can’t stop thinking about you
Yet you don’t think about me
I can’t stop missing you
Yet you don’t miss me
One minute I felt so special
And now I feel stupid
I guess there’s no one to blame
Or maybe blame cupid
You left me just like that
Just hanging in the air
And right before I sleep
There is so much pain to bear
So just bear the hurt
Even if it cuts like a blade
Because for the 2nd time
I’ve been played
I can’t stop thinking about you
Yet you don’t think about me
I can’t stop missing you
Yet you don’t miss me
One minute I felt so special
And now I feel stupid
I guess there’s no one to blame
Or maybe blame cupid
You left me just like that
Just hanging in the air
And right before I sleep
There is so much pain to bear
So just bear the hurt
Even if it cuts like a blade
Because for the 2nd time
I’ve been played
posted by luckym at 4:45 PM
7 Comments:
all your postings are about heartbreaks. i hope u will soon get over d pain. there's always d impression that ur a chickboy type, so it's odd to read that u'v been played.& twice at that!
well... let's just hope you won't get played again...
that you'd choose wiser/smarter next time... and be luckier :)
just bloghopping
what a sad poem. it breaks my heart just reading it...
i was just blog-hopping and eventually i ended up at your site.never thought you also had a blog.well,anyways nice poem you got here dude,somhow i can relate to your poem.hehe.
good day.
awww man! spare us! rewrite all your poems. you can do better than that. dig deeper into your subconscious. yo're too old to be writing like this. c'mon!
-ging (literary coach, hahaha)
awww man! spare us! rewrite all your poems. you can do better than that. dig deeper into your subconscious. yo're too old to be writing like this. c'mon!
-ging (literary coach, hahaha)
=( ...*sniff, sniff*...
cool poem man!
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