Thursday, August 19, 2004

old poem.. but just posted it, what do u think?

STUPID

I can’t stop thinking about you
Yet you don’t think about me
I can’t stop missing you
Yet you don’t miss me

One minute I felt so special
And now I feel stupid
I guess there’s no one to blame
Or maybe blame cupid

You left me just like that
Just hanging in the air
And right before I sleep
There is so much pain to bear

So just bear the hurt
Even if it cuts like a blade
Because for the 2nd time
I’ve been played

10 Comments:

Blogger Almarie said...

brief... yet heartfelt. keep on writing! ")
p.s. just bloghopping. i hope you don't mind.

1:30 PM  
Blogger pamelanieves said...

hi! just read your poem. hmmmm.... you have a talent! hahaha! peace! just droppin' by! God bless!

3:42 PM  
Blogger mrdl said...

all your postings are about heartbreaks. i hope u will soon get over d pain. there's always d impression that ur a chickboy type, so it's odd to read that u'v been played.& twice at that!

12:42 PM  
Blogger Mec said...

well... let's just hope you won't get played again...

that you'd choose wiser/smarter next time... and be luckier :)

just bloghopping

4:05 PM  
Blogger liz said...

what a sad poem. it breaks my heart just reading it...

12:34 PM  
Blogger luiboi said...

i was just blog-hopping and eventually i ended up at your site.never thought you also had a blog.well,anyways nice poem you got here dude,somhow i can relate to your poem.hehe.

good day.

8:19 PM  
Blogger gingmaganda said...

awww man! spare us! rewrite all your poems. you can do better than that. dig deeper into your subconscious. yo're too old to be writing like this. c'mon!
-ging (literary coach, hahaha)

7:18 PM  
Blogger gingmaganda said...

awww man! spare us! rewrite all your poems. you can do better than that. dig deeper into your subconscious. yo're too old to be writing like this. c'mon!
-ging (literary coach, hahaha)

7:21 PM  
Blogger izey said...

damn..*sniff*
i didnt know ur good at writing poems..
keep on doing this. and i hope sumday ul find wat ur luking for. GOD knows ur waiting..;)

8:22 AM  
Blogger aCey said...

=( ...*sniff, sniff*...

cool poem man!

1:03 PM  

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